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17/30
Clear, developed understanding with apt references throughout. Shows awareness of the complexity of Austen's presentation and uses a range of examples from across the novel.
Clear explanation of Austen's methods including irony and the use of different characters to present different views. Good use of subject terminology.
This is a well-developed response that demonstrates clear understanding of Austen's complex presentation of marriage. Your recognition of her irony and use of contrasting characters is effective. The analysis shows good awareness of the text's subtleties.
Effective use of Charlotte and Elizabeth as contrasting examples
Good understanding of marriage as 'transaction' in Regency society
Analyse specific language choices more closely - look at the vocabulary of the opening paragraphs
Consider the narrative voice - how does Austen's narration create irony?